tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-57690604197810955632024-03-08T09:32:50.253-08:00Joel's Fiction BlogThis blog is where I will be posting some of my short stories, writing exercises, and eventually, excerpts from a novel. Your job is to read and comment. I want to know what worked and didn't, what jumped out, and what should be deleted. I've had other writers read my work, but I also want readers to read my work. Readers are why writers write. Right? :) So please, critique my work and be honest. My feelings won't be hurt. Please feel free to point out any grammar or puncuation/spelling. Thanks!Joel T Whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06948043318759962845noreply@blogger.comBlogger0125