Joel's Fiction Blog

This blog is where I will be posting some of my short stories, writing exercises, and eventually, excerpts from a novel. Your job is to read and comment. I want to know what worked and didn't, what jumped out, and what should be deleted. I've had other writers read my work, but I also want readers to read my work. Readers are why writers write. Right? :) So please, critique my work and be honest. My feelings won't be hurt. Please feel free to point out any grammar or puncuation/spelling. Thanks!